Where from?
How long have you got
it?
What do you use it
for?
Why it is important
to you?
Task Fulfillment
Well,
I’ll start the ball rolling by touching on the matter of the most significant
things that I have owned in my life and where I got it from. Beyond your
expectation, maybe, they are the rubber gloves that my husband gave me as his
proposal items after two years of dating, about 3 years ago, I guess. Honestly speaking, I was totally into him, by
which I mean I laid such a huge belief in his statement that the gloves were a
greater symbol than a ring.
Moving
onto the next point, I have been keeping the pair of gloves in the basement for
such a long time. In fact, they have not been used for my chores since I’m kind of
the person, who often hangs on to old memories and I would like to store my best
marriage gift in a safe place.
Finally,
if time permits, I would really like to highlight their crucial role after I
walked down the aisle with my husband. Perhaps, they may not be something rare
or precious, however in my point of view, the gift is of high sentimental
value as it creates durable bonds between us.
Analysis:
1. Coherence and cohesiveness:
-Connective features: I'll start the ball rolling by touching on the matter of ..........(+N)
Beyond your expectation, maybe,
Honestly speaking,
Moving onto the next point,
In fact
Since
Finally, if time permits
Perhaps
however
2. Grammar: Superlative (twice) the most significant-my best marriage gift (proposal gift to be more exact)
Past tense in the first and third paragraphs, present perfect continuous in the second one.
3. Vocabulary: significant, proposal, symbol, chores, to hang on to old memories (idiom), crucial, rare and precious, of high sentimental value, durable bonds.
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